Do You Have a Favorite Place?

Original Date: October, 2000

Style: Non-Fiction

Score (1-5): 4/ 88 B

Do you have a favorite place? I do it’s my backyard why? because I can play around, play with my dogs, and watch birds.

The first reason I like my backyard is because I can play around. Win I’m outside I race my brother and cousin. Once we had a Olympics and we raced I won but my brother always wanted a remach but I kept beating him. I also play football sometimes. Once win I was quarterback my brother kept sacking me. I think footballsawesome because it’s fun. I also like to play army. Me my brother and cousin pretend we are fighting monsters are tree house is base.

I like my backyard is because I can play with my dogs iny time I want. Once we were playing Indians my two dogs were buffalo. We pretend to shoot them with arrows. I also like my dogs because we play fetch. We throw balls and bones. One of my dogs fetch’s the ball but doesent come back. I also like my dogs because we play chase the dog. To play some neighbor has to turn on the lawn mower then he runs and barks at it when we chase him.

The finall reason my backyard is awesome in because I can watch beautiful birds. When my mom feeds the birds I see Blue Jays, Cardinals, and Robins. One I saw bird of prey stalky my pet ducks. I think it was a Perigone Falcone witch can go 200 mph. I also like watching the woodpecker that lives in my tree. I watch all these birds from my treehouse.

In conclusion, I think my backyard is awesome because. I can play around, play with my dogs, and to watch birds. I really think that a backyard is a kids dream come true.

 

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